Monday, February 28, 2011

Confusing Passage

A part I found confusing is were Pip says "This was so much her normal state that Joe and I would often for weeks together, be, as to our fingers, like monumental Crusaders as to theur legs." (pg 20, chapter 4). What does this mean? I realize what Pip is saying is supposed to exagerate how horrible Mrs. Joe acts to her husband and little brother but the Crusader reference is difficult to dechiper. Also, the detail about fingers doesn't make much sense to me either.
Sorry my Blog was late but please help me!
Alena

Saturday, February 12, 2011

Group Essay Collaboration

1. I haven't changed much in my paragraph. I did forget the conclusion so i do have to add that but that shouldn't really change anything in your paragraphs. What transitions did you guys use? I said "To start off bieing dishonest about your about identity is used by many of the characters to open different doors of oppertunity for pleasure." We have to make sure our sepreate topic sentences are the same as what we put in the introduction.

2. Chase- Did you type up the final draft of the conclusion?

Bobbee- What concrete detail did you use for your last one?